Primary 1 awarded pieces* (2nd place, 3rd place and merits)
My Dream SECOND PLACE
Trevor Choy 1D
Have you ever watched a car racing show yet? Isn’t it exciting? I would like to be a racing car designer when I grow up.
Global warming and global cooling are two major environmental concerns nowadays. Air pollution is one of the factors causing global warming and global cooling.
Thus, I would like to become a racing car designer who designs environmental friendly racing car.
If I were a racing car designer, I would like to design a car which is moved by electricity. It saves fuel and prevents air pollution. I would like to make it with light but hard material. Then the racing car can move quickly without consuming much electricity. I believe my racing car would be the fastest, the most beautiful designed and the most environmental friendly in the world.
Trevor Choy 1D
Have you ever watched a car racing show yet? Isn’t it exciting? I would like to be a racing car designer when I grow up.
Global warming and global cooling are two major environmental concerns nowadays. Air pollution is one of the factors causing global warming and global cooling.
Thus, I would like to become a racing car designer who designs environmental friendly racing car.
If I were a racing car designer, I would like to design a car which is moved by electricity. It saves fuel and prevents air pollution. I would like to make it with light but hard material. Then the racing car can move quickly without consuming much electricity. I believe my racing car would be the fastest, the most beautiful designed and the most environmental friendly in the world.
A Letter to a Detective THIRD PLACE
Ephrem Chong 1C
Dear Mr Sherlock Holmes,
How do you do? My father told me you are the most famous detective in the world. I want to be a detective. So I write this letter to you.
I know you live at 221B, Baker Street, London. What tools do you use to solve problem? What knowledge do you need to crack criminal cases? Why do you choose detective as your job? Do you have any assistants? How to become a smart detective?
My school is holding a detective activity this year. Will you came to my school? I hope you can guide and teach us how to be an excellent detective.
Mr. Holmes, guess where my school is? The address of my school is hidden in the secret code below. I trust you can crack it. Ha Ha!
I look forward to receiving your reply and seeing you at my school.
Love,
Ephrem
Hong Kong
Ephrem Chong 1C
Dear Mr Sherlock Holmes,
How do you do? My father told me you are the most famous detective in the world. I want to be a detective. So I write this letter to you.
I know you live at 221B, Baker Street, London. What tools do you use to solve problem? What knowledge do you need to crack criminal cases? Why do you choose detective as your job? Do you have any assistants? How to become a smart detective?
My school is holding a detective activity this year. Will you came to my school? I hope you can guide and teach us how to be an excellent detective.
Mr. Holmes, guess where my school is? The address of my school is hidden in the secret code below. I trust you can crack it. Ha Ha!
I look forward to receiving your reply and seeing you at my school.
Love,
Ephrem
Hong Kong
My Favourite Sport MERIT
Mason Leung 1A
Sport is good for health because it can make us healthier and stronger. What is your favourite sport?
My favourite sport is playing basketball because it is very exciting. When I see the NBA stars in TV programme. I think they are very attractive . I like this sport because I think it is a sport for man,. Physically, it can keep us fit. More importantly, I can always play basketball with my father. I enjoy it very much.
Basketball is a very good sport. If you want to be taller and healthier, I believe that playing basketball is a good choice.
Mason Leung 1A
Sport is good for health because it can make us healthier and stronger. What is your favourite sport?
My favourite sport is playing basketball because it is very exciting. When I see the NBA stars in TV programme. I think they are very attractive . I like this sport because I think it is a sport for man,. Physically, it can keep us fit. More importantly, I can always play basketball with my father. I enjoy it very much.
Basketball is a very good sport. If you want to be taller and healthier, I believe that playing basketball is a good choice.
My Dream MERIT
Lo Wai Cheuk 1C
My dream is to be a rocket designer. I want to build a rocket that allow 1,000 astronauts traveling to the Jupiter at the same time.
My rocket can transform into different forms. It can transform into a restaurant. Astronauts can order food whatever they want.
It can transform into a supermarket too! All the foods are on the shelf and will not be floating. And astronauts pay the money to the machine on the door.
At night, the rocket can transform into a theatre for astronauts to see movies.
There is a tunnel for astronauts to transit to the rocket. The one who stands behind the rocket is me! I am holding the plan of my dream rocket.
Lo Wai Cheuk 1C
My dream is to be a rocket designer. I want to build a rocket that allow 1,000 astronauts traveling to the Jupiter at the same time.
My rocket can transform into different forms. It can transform into a restaurant. Astronauts can order food whatever they want.
It can transform into a supermarket too! All the foods are on the shelf and will not be floating. And astronauts pay the money to the machine on the door.
At night, the rocket can transform into a theatre for astronauts to see movies.
There is a tunnel for astronauts to transit to the rocket. The one who stands behind the rocket is me! I am holding the plan of my dream rocket.
My Favourite Place MERIT
Hubert Wong 1E
My favourite place is Legoland Water Park in Malaysia. Last year, I went on a trip to there. There was a “lazy river” in the water park. It had no water flow. I used Lego blocks to design and build a ship called “Noah ship”. It looked like the toy ship at my home. I was sailing in my boat along the river.
Not far, there was a family tube slide. Each rubber boat could hold six people to slide down on a curving track. I was so excited to play again and again.
It is my favourite place because there are many exciting water games for children to play. It is an unforgettable memory. I hope I will visit again.
Hubert Wong 1E
My favourite place is Legoland Water Park in Malaysia. Last year, I went on a trip to there. There was a “lazy river” in the water park. It had no water flow. I used Lego blocks to design and build a ship called “Noah ship”. It looked like the toy ship at my home. I was sailing in my boat along the river.
Not far, there was a family tube slide. Each rubber boat could hold six people to slide down on a curving track. I was so excited to play again and again.
It is my favourite place because there are many exciting water games for children to play. It is an unforgettable memory. I hope I will visit again.
A Letter to a Detective MERIT
Issac Wu 1E
Dear Detective Mike,
How are you doing lately? I saw you in the newspaper last week. It was about you resolved a terror plan towards United States. You are a hero and save a lof of lives.
How do you know the flight attendant intend to poison the pilot before it takes into action? If the flight attendant captures the flight and crashes into the White House. It would be a crisis.
I want to be a detective like you in the future.
Love,
Issac
Issac Wu 1E
Dear Detective Mike,
How are you doing lately? I saw you in the newspaper last week. It was about you resolved a terror plan towards United States. You are a hero and save a lof of lives.
How do you know the flight attendant intend to poison the pilot before it takes into action? If the flight attendant captures the flight and crashes into the White House. It would be a crisis.
I want to be a detective like you in the future.
Love,
Issac
