Primary 1 awarded pieces* (2nd place, 3rd place and merits)
A Holiday with My Pet SECOND PLACE
Ian Ng 1E
I have a dog pet, its name is Peter.
Today, we play on the sand and build aa sandcastle. It is very huge. I also eat ice cream. There are 30 flavors, such as lemon, apple, kiwi, strawberry, chocolate and green tea etc. Next, we go to the hotel. Inside the hotel, there is a dog playground and a cafe. After that, we have a cup of coffee for me. I have a treat in my pocket. Then, I give the treat to my pet dog.
In the end, I am very tired but I learn to “take good care of your own pet”.
My Superpower! THIRD PLACE
Jace Hui 1E
I have some superpowers. I use my powers for anyone who needs help. Let me tell you some of my powers. The first power is flying. I can fly superfast. Faster than an airplane! How cool is that! Next power is blasting fireballs. I use them to fight big and strong bad guys. Last power is dig fast.
Today, I go to buy food. On the way home, there are some bad guys. They want to get my money and food. I try to fight them, but they are too strong. I then dig back home. When I get home, I call the cops to catch the bad guys, but the cops are too weak to fight. So I go to fight the bad guys with my superhot fireballs. Soon, I catch the bad guys. The cops thank me.
I feel very happy.
A Holiday with My Pet MERIT
Kinson Lai 1B
Today, I am going to Japan. There are lots of games, like shooting and snowball fighting. So, I am going to bring my pet lizard. His name is Liz. I love him!
First, we will do the check-in. After that, we will go on the airplane. I am so excited! We have arrived in Japan. It is very cold. Now we will go to our hotel. We go by taxi.
We have finally arrived at our hotel! There is one bunk bed, one kitchen and one bathroom. Now, it’s time to sleep. When I got up, it’s 7p.m. It’s time to go to the snowball fight. After we do the snowball fight, it is time to go home. What a great day! I am looking forward to going to Japan again! To be continued.
A Holiday with My Pet MERIT
Kobe Cheng 1C
Imagine that I can travel with my dog. First, we will go to the park and play the slide. We will be very happy! We will go to the hotel and jump on the bed. We will go swimming too. We love playing with the water! We feel happy and joyful! We will go to the Legoland and build some Legos. We enjoy playing with the Legos! We will sleep in the hotel. We will go to the zoo to feed the rabbits.
Next, we will ride on the horse. The horse runs very fast. When we are very sleepy, we go back to the hotel and sleep.
After that, we will go home by car. We will sleep and have a good dream. I love playing with my dog.
My Superpower! MERIT
Haysen Law 1C
One day, I have a spider web superpower. It is very cool! It can shoot webs. One day, our school is going to the forest. It is dark and scary. When we go to the forest to have lunch, there’s a snake coming at our lunch box. The teachers and the student are scared, they run. I am shooting my spider web to the snake. Now the snake can’t come to our lunch box. We are save!
It is almost mid-day, and we go back to our school and go home.
My superpower has gone.
A Holiday with My Pet MERIT
Choi Cheuk Kiu 1D
My pet is a robot rabbit. It is cute. It is chubby. I like it. Its name is Tubo.
In the holiday, I go to Shenzhen with my pet. We bring luggage.
At Shenzhen, first, we eat together. The food is delightfully delicious. I love them. My dog likes them too! Then, we walk in the park. It is big. Next, we eat dessert. It is yummy.
Finally, I am happy. We go back from Shenzhen to Hong Kong. I want to go to Shenzhen again.
My Superpower! MERIT
Lai Tsun Ting 1D
Last winter, I ate a hamburger. Then, I run fast. I have run 2 hours long and I said, ‘Why I will become this?’ I try to hold a huge stone, ‘Wow!’ I said. I can hold it! I go home and said, ‘I have strong powers,’ My dad and mum said, ‘What?’ and I said, ‘Yes’ and my mum and dad said, ‘Show it!’ I showed it and said, ‘I can hold whatever I want.’
One day, I see the moon crashing on the Earth, and I hold the moon and threw it into the space. I like my power all the time because I can help everyone on Earth, and I become a hero.
Ian Ng 1E
I have a dog pet, its name is Peter.
Today, we play on the sand and build aa sandcastle. It is very huge. I also eat ice cream. There are 30 flavors, such as lemon, apple, kiwi, strawberry, chocolate and green tea etc. Next, we go to the hotel. Inside the hotel, there is a dog playground and a cafe. After that, we have a cup of coffee for me. I have a treat in my pocket. Then, I give the treat to my pet dog.
In the end, I am very tired but I learn to “take good care of your own pet”.
My Superpower! THIRD PLACE
Jace Hui 1E
I have some superpowers. I use my powers for anyone who needs help. Let me tell you some of my powers. The first power is flying. I can fly superfast. Faster than an airplane! How cool is that! Next power is blasting fireballs. I use them to fight big and strong bad guys. Last power is dig fast.
Today, I go to buy food. On the way home, there are some bad guys. They want to get my money and food. I try to fight them, but they are too strong. I then dig back home. When I get home, I call the cops to catch the bad guys, but the cops are too weak to fight. So I go to fight the bad guys with my superhot fireballs. Soon, I catch the bad guys. The cops thank me.
I feel very happy.
A Holiday with My Pet MERIT
Kinson Lai 1B
Today, I am going to Japan. There are lots of games, like shooting and snowball fighting. So, I am going to bring my pet lizard. His name is Liz. I love him!
First, we will do the check-in. After that, we will go on the airplane. I am so excited! We have arrived in Japan. It is very cold. Now we will go to our hotel. We go by taxi.
We have finally arrived at our hotel! There is one bunk bed, one kitchen and one bathroom. Now, it’s time to sleep. When I got up, it’s 7p.m. It’s time to go to the snowball fight. After we do the snowball fight, it is time to go home. What a great day! I am looking forward to going to Japan again! To be continued.
A Holiday with My Pet MERIT
Kobe Cheng 1C
Imagine that I can travel with my dog. First, we will go to the park and play the slide. We will be very happy! We will go to the hotel and jump on the bed. We will go swimming too. We love playing with the water! We feel happy and joyful! We will go to the Legoland and build some Legos. We enjoy playing with the Legos! We will sleep in the hotel. We will go to the zoo to feed the rabbits.
Next, we will ride on the horse. The horse runs very fast. When we are very sleepy, we go back to the hotel and sleep.
After that, we will go home by car. We will sleep and have a good dream. I love playing with my dog.
My Superpower! MERIT
Haysen Law 1C
One day, I have a spider web superpower. It is very cool! It can shoot webs. One day, our school is going to the forest. It is dark and scary. When we go to the forest to have lunch, there’s a snake coming at our lunch box. The teachers and the student are scared, they run. I am shooting my spider web to the snake. Now the snake can’t come to our lunch box. We are save!
It is almost mid-day, and we go back to our school and go home.
My superpower has gone.
A Holiday with My Pet MERIT
Choi Cheuk Kiu 1D
My pet is a robot rabbit. It is cute. It is chubby. I like it. Its name is Tubo.
In the holiday, I go to Shenzhen with my pet. We bring luggage.
At Shenzhen, first, we eat together. The food is delightfully delicious. I love them. My dog likes them too! Then, we walk in the park. It is big. Next, we eat dessert. It is yummy.
Finally, I am happy. We go back from Shenzhen to Hong Kong. I want to go to Shenzhen again.
My Superpower! MERIT
Lai Tsun Ting 1D
Last winter, I ate a hamburger. Then, I run fast. I have run 2 hours long and I said, ‘Why I will become this?’ I try to hold a huge stone, ‘Wow!’ I said. I can hold it! I go home and said, ‘I have strong powers,’ My dad and mum said, ‘What?’ and I said, ‘Yes’ and my mum and dad said, ‘Show it!’ I showed it and said, ‘I can hold whatever I want.’
One day, I see the moon crashing on the Earth, and I hold the moon and threw it into the space. I like my power all the time because I can help everyone on Earth, and I become a hero.
